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This story takes place in a land not so far away
It begins in the fall as trees shed their colors to gray
And as the cold surreptitiously makes its embrace felt
Under a large maple leaf a little bird was seeking refuge
Smaller than your fist he was and his wings were no use
Under a large maple leaf a little bird sees the world so huge
Then one day a wildcat came and blew the leaf away
What on earth are you doing here on your own ?
With your peers shouldn’t you have already flown ?
So I hoped for but I cannot fly
So I stay here with my leaf my sole ally
Speak no other words and follow me
On this land I could use some company
So the bird left his leaf behind
With no regret but only joy in mind
So he climbed up onto the wildcat’s back
And thus they went as the sky turned black
There were bears all in teeth and claws
Unnameable monsters overshadowing moonless nights
There were angry winds and sad rains
Shining hairs of light tearing the celestial canvas
Though affraid they overcame
Though tired they tried
Grateful the little bird sang :
My friend this is quite a journey I say
Because you are brave with you I’ll stay
The wildcat appreciated :
You’re right, together we’ve gone far
With you I’ll stay because you are
Food was rare
Hunger everywhere
The odds unfair
But still they made it square
Satiated the little bird sang :
When food lacks your imagination doesn’ I say
Because you’re clever with you I’ll stay
The wildcat appreciated :
Against hunger you must win the war
And with you I’ll stay because you are
Came the snow, the white damnation
Came the ice, treacherous buffoon
Ceased the flow in a frozen vision
Ceased the life in a fallacious bloom
As thick as would get the trail
Their will never seemed to fail
Again the little bird sang :
My dearest friend soon we will meet our doom I say
Because no things manage to break your mood I’ll stay
Meanwhile a wilder cat appeared out of the blue
His whiskers were fine and his fur was too
His winks at our feline were quite obvious
Least to say the latter wasn’ oblivious
To the little bird, eyes sparkling, in cat’s mewing :
Let us part here and on seperate roads let us go
We know sorrow will appear, if not today tomorrow
And the bird looked at them flee
And he watched the scene in dismay
And thus ended a fragile party
And thus ends a clumsy story
Under a large maple leaf a bird sits cryin’
Under a large maple leaf a bird sits wonderin’
Wonderin’ wonderin’ what he had ever been
It begins in the fall as trees shed their colors to gray
And as the cold surreptitiously makes its embrace felt
Under a large maple leaf a little bird was seeking refuge
Smaller than your fist he was and his wings were no use
Under a large maple leaf a little bird sees the world so huge
Then one day a wildcat came and blew the leaf away
What on earth are you doing here on your own ?
With your peers shouldn’t you have already flown ?
So I hoped for but I cannot fly
So I stay here with my leaf my sole ally
Speak no other words and follow me
On this land I could use some company
So the bird left his leaf behind
With no regret but only joy in mind
So he climbed up onto the wildcat’s back
And thus they went as the sky turned black
There were bears all in teeth and claws
Unnameable monsters overshadowing moonless nights
There were angry winds and sad rains
Shining hairs of light tearing the celestial canvas
Though affraid they overcame
Though tired they tried
Grateful the little bird sang :
My friend this is quite a journey I say
Because you are brave with you I’ll stay
The wildcat appreciated :
You’re right, together we’ve gone far
With you I’ll stay because you are
Food was rare
Hunger everywhere
The odds unfair
But still they made it square
Satiated the little bird sang :
When food lacks your imagination doesn’ I say
Because you’re clever with you I’ll stay
The wildcat appreciated :
Against hunger you must win the war
And with you I’ll stay because you are
Came the snow, the white damnation
Came the ice, treacherous buffoon
Ceased the flow in a frozen vision
Ceased the life in a fallacious bloom
As thick as would get the trail
Their will never seemed to fail
Again the little bird sang :
My dearest friend soon we will meet our doom I say
Because no things manage to break your mood I’ll stay
Meanwhile a wilder cat appeared out of the blue
His whiskers were fine and his fur was too
His winks at our feline were quite obvious
Least to say the latter wasn’ oblivious
To the little bird, eyes sparkling, in cat’s mewing :
Let us part here and on seperate roads let us go
We know sorrow will appear, if not today tomorrow
And the bird looked at them flee
And he watched the scene in dismay
And thus ended a fragile party
And thus ends a clumsy story
Under a large maple leaf a bird sits cryin’
Under a large maple leaf a bird sits wonderin’
Wonderin’ wonderin’ what he had ever been
Title: "The Little Bird and the Wildcat Fable"
At last, it is done. Done enough for me for now.
Technical: I did try to follow some rules but broke them if I couldn't get the emotion I wanted. I know the stanzas that don't rhyme sort of break the rythm but I couldn't let go of some metaphors. There shouldn't be any typo left and I hope no unwanted grammatical or spelling irregularities remain, that'd kill me really. I think that's all here.
So this is for the two or three people who are going to read the poem : go harsh on criticism. Please go ahead and butcher every verse with the knife of your erudition. Tell me to leave English poetry writing to anglophones. Tell me I'm wrong to think that this is well-written, witty, deep and touching. So then I shall remove the poem and stop wasting my time and mind.
The writing was part of my therapy and so's the sharing.
Thank you
At last, it is done. Done enough for me for now.
Technical: I did try to follow some rules but broke them if I couldn't get the emotion I wanted. I know the stanzas that don't rhyme sort of break the rythm but I couldn't let go of some metaphors. There shouldn't be any typo left and I hope no unwanted grammatical or spelling irregularities remain, that'd kill me really. I think that's all here.
So this is for the two or three people who are going to read the poem : go harsh on criticism. Please go ahead and butcher every verse with the knife of your erudition. Tell me to leave English poetry writing to anglophones. Tell me I'm wrong to think that this is well-written, witty, deep and touching. So then I shall remove the poem and stop wasting my time and mind.
The writing was part of my therapy and so's the sharing.
Thank you
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ohgawd! Wonderful! Just wonderful!